A good piece of copy here, sent in from long-time Fixer, Ben Figg. (Thanks for letting us share it, Ben.)

It’s a spec piece he’s written for a landing page (though is based on a real product offering), where the prospect will be coming in from a Facebook advert.

As always, Nick offers some great insight into how it could be improved, with ideas specific to this page or for a page like it.

We hope you find it useful, and remember, if you’d like us to review your copy in this way, just drop us a line (feedback@thefixcopywriting.com) or you can bring your copy to one of the Friday live calls.

Best,
Glenn