This copy is a work in progress, from one of your fellow members, Ayoub.

I spent 20 minutes talking about how I think it could be improved, plus I threw in a few new lead ideas too.

If you’re into direct response financial copy (let’s call it ‘Agora Style’ for reference), you might like this.

If you’re unfamiliar with that niche, this might be an eye-opener.

Remember, if you’d like us to review your copy (either for the group like this or privately) – drop us an email and we’ll put it on the pile.

Cheers,

Nick